cries of a child's fears
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Book by: Queensiren
Grace Midfield is a strong headed young girl who's lives with her best friend Gege. after cleaning out the basement of there house they find a letter from Grace's dead mother leaving a old mansion to her but pleading her never to live in it. being the silly young girls they are they decide to "visit" for a week. but after a nightmare Gege has the night before about a little girl she's not so sure its a good idea.
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Submitted: November 03, 2011
Submitted: November 03, 2011
Recent Comments
Bad grammar... lol...
I have a one of the worst grammar known to mankind. I often speak with double and triple negatives without even knowing and I often type how I speak. I was also told several times that English is my second language... hehe. It's my first and only... and that's sad.
Grammar I guess can be a big deal, it somewhat held me back from attempting to write a novel, many, many years ago...
Then I found out that I'm not alone; there are other authors who also has the same handycap.
So my advise is do the best you can, just remember, the hardest part in writing is putting the stuff onto paper. The proof reading stuff (fixing grammar errors) is the easy part.
Gothic and creepy... Good read, the format makes it hard to read at first but I've also have the same problem when I transfer my stories into this site.
I like to suggest a break or something on the very long "Rose Red Story" there is a ton of information in your story and it would be nice to spread it out so we can enjoy the fuits or maybe make that a chapter 3... and chapter 4 is after the long story.
:)
im glad you like it. im very bad with grammer so im sorry about that im dislexic and word can only help me so much. also the reson i put so much info in to the chapters is becuz the other chapters will rpboly have just as much going on with them. im not big on realy slow storys and have alot planed that you for your feed back ^^
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