LOVE ME LOVE ME!!

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

you can't make someone love you

LOVE ME LOVE ME!

I beg!

I can’t make you

I can’t change you

And I’m a fool to beg you

I give everything I can

And all I have

LOVE ME LOVE ME!

I beg!

Forget the past

And let it go

Fuck the drama

And hold me close

See the effort

All that I give

No one could treat you better

Be with me forever

LOVE ME LOVE ME!

I beg!

But that’s foolishness in me

To give and give

To trust and wait

If it’s not happening yet

Then it’s something I should just forget

But I hold on instead

LOVE ME LOVE ME!

But I WON’T beg!


Submitted: December 05, 2014

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Raymose josi

nice work,quetzala

Fri, December 5th, 2014 6:09pm

Author
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THANK YOU :)

Fri, December 5th, 2014 10:39am

TheClanDestine

he who has a how can bare any why. there's people that are skilled at manipulate someone into loving them, granted these people are assholes, but it can be done. they know all the right buttons to push, but it is not love. your poems more about asking for real love, in a more compassionate way, with the other person not reciprocating. just find a how and keep trying or accept and move on. anyway, good poem. your stuff rocks.

Sun, February 1st, 2015 4:45am

XaelNox

Fuck the drama XD

Mon, August 22nd, 2016 3:57am

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