Invisible--Quin Marie

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Just a poem I wrote. No summary needed.

I'm invisible
Unseen to the eye
Very few have seen me
Very few have tried

No one knows the pain I face
All I've felt and seen
It's as if I don't exist
That my life is just a dream

My voice cannot be heard
My shadow is erased
No one sees the tears I've cried
I'm gone without a trace

I try to speak up
But my voice is unheard
I'm alone in this world
My image: blurred

Emptiness is what I leave behind
To the few who've seen me
An empty feeling so unbearable
It makes it hard to breathe

Does anyone actually know me?
Has anyone ever tried
To see what makes me invisible
To see what makes me cry

I'm alone in this world
You're not here to care
Alone and forgotten
A pain I cannot bear

Maybe the time has come
For me to just walk away
Leave the place I come from
Where I'm alone all day

I doubt that there's caring
I don't trust the kind
I'm alone and invisible
A figure of someone's mind

Submitted: February 07, 2013

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SO many emotions released here. Nice job. Sad however, you have do great work with your emotions and you know how to keep the reader hanging on until the last word. ANother great job.

Sun, February 17th, 2013 3:11pm



Sun, February 17th, 2013 3:29pm

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