peter pan

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Poem by: rachel1715

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Status: In Progress | Genre: Romance | House: Booksie Classic

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this is a love struck girl who is struggling to find her place.

Submitted: January 30, 2016

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Peter pan, take me to Neverland, but first promise not to hurt me.

I love you.

Never leave.

Shes back isn't she.

You lied. You still love her.

I must leave. I can't do this.

I love you. I will miss you.

Say, you will miss me too.

Say you won't hurt her like, you did to me.

You came back to me.

I feel back in love with you.

I need you.

You left me.

I found my place in this world.

You are trying to take it away again?

I must say goodbye.

I must give up on you.

Peter, please leave me.

Neverland I will always miss you.

You were always my forever home. My hideaway.

My goodbye. It's forever.

You came back, but I found my place so, go back to her.

I can’t do what she did to me, to her.

So I love you but goodbye.

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Emma Brooks

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Sat, February 6th, 2016 7:30am

What I really loved especially was the pace. It was short and punchy and scattered, which I felt really added to the overall confusion. It reminded me of how when we are in love, we have all of these emotions and feelings and irrational fears. Sometimes we find it hard to believe that someone loves or they did something wrong with another person and then we feel like they're awful. I felt it truly embodied the raw feelings of how one is when they are in love and a brief idea of the though process that I'm sure many girls go through when they are. Beautiful piece of work and keep it up Rachel!! Have an great day! :)
-Hyuna