Blood War (written out of inspiration from kirkys work)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
after reading the marines, i wrote this about a girl who lost her husband to war....

Submitted: September 09, 2009

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It's a blood war

nothings safe anymore

things are spinning out of control

I can't hold out

It's all crumbling down

Im falling down

Can't stand up

Can't move forward

Im scared and sore

I dont care about me anymore

It's him ive fallen for

its him im sorry for

I tried and tried

I prayed and prayed

I loved and loved

its no use

its all come crumbling down

im spinning around

looking and searching

cant find him anywhere

hes gone forever more

no longer in my life

no longer here with me

im scared and lonely

I dont know how to be

this world is changing

always moving

I dont want to enter it alone

I miss him

I still feel him though I cant see him

his blood has been spilled

in the blood war

and i'll never see him again


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