Deborah. . . A hard time

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
this is for my friend deborah who is going through a hard time. so i wrote this for her.

Submitted: April 03, 2009

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A couple in a deep romance.

They are in such a state.

It breaks my heart to think about.

But there love is just so great.

She cares for him.

More than he knows.

It's true she realy does.

Each word that leaves her mouth, is of him in some way.

She tells us each and everyday.

She loves him more than herself.

It is so very sweet.

So we pressume he must be so great.

For a great girl like herself, to have fallen for him so deep.

She speaks of him as her everything.

He is the air she breathes.

Im slightley jelousof there romance though not after today.

She tells us of a phone call.

She recieved the night before.

It was from him.

Her one true love.

Telling her shes not the one.

It breaks her heart to hear his words; 'I dont love you'

It hurts me deep to see the tears fall from her light blue eyes.

I think; 'what a basterd. to hurt my friend in such a way.'

Though she tells me that she still cares.

Although they are apart right now.

i see the longing in her heart.

If only he was a nicer guy, for he couldnt see her big heart.

But the fact that she still loves him

even though hes turned her down.

Is what i liked to call, a little thing called true love.

Dedicated to Deborah...you'll be okay girl! Guys are not everything!


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