Testing Time.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

These simple lines were created on the spur of moment, reflection of my thoughts as I am trying to reach out to all of you through my poety.

Let me test the ground

for its power to hold

for its warmth and cold,

Let me test the ground

for its willingness to bear

for its readiness to care,

Lert me test the ground

will it fertile the seed

and protect its breed,

Let me test the ground

is it ready for the battle

when the skies rattle,

Let me test the ground

can it accept the change

and widen its range.



Submitted: June 11, 2008

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I think it's very pretty. It's kind of a poem that doesnt seem to have a set meaning. That there will be a different meaning for different people. Did you have a specific meaning you wrote it for? =) Mandy

Wed, June 11th, 2008 2:01pm


Yes Mandy, You are right. I din't realized it ..then..
sorry I am a bit late in responding to your comment as I am
new to net and groping may way in...Thanks for your comment.


Wed, June 18th, 2008 5:17am


Hi Mandy,what you say seems to be true, I din't realized it while posting. Thanks for your comment...
it will help...Please comment on my other poem
'Broken Star.

Fri, June 13th, 2008 12:02pm

Shah Usman Riwayat


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