More Than Love

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic
This is a poemi wrote for a contest, I based it on my feelings for my boyfriend. I am not good at writing romantic things, and to tell the truth this is probably the first "romantic" thing I have probably ever wrote. So i am sorry it is it doesn't sound romantic in anyway. I did my best so read if you want, comment if you feel like it. If you feel that I could improve it in anyway please let me know.

Submitted: March 24, 2010

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It’s in the air

In the eyes

And the heart

The lift of his smile
Sets my heart a fire

The steps taken
Grow faster

More than love
Passion 


More is less

That’s what they say
I don’t hear

But my eyes are clear 
Yet clouded 

With feelings that are near
There’s pep in my step

When my eyes meet his
More than love

Passion


When we walk 
When we talk

When we touch
We feel

Just how much 
This love is real
More than love

Passion
 
 
 


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