Are you alive?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic
A story about emma , A 13 year old who was brutely murdered but doesnt quite know it.

Submitted: November 10, 2010

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Submitted: November 10, 2010



"Your dead arent you?"


"Who killed you?"

"My boyfriend"


"Cant you stop asking questions"

"I know its hard but i need to know why"

"I dont know why he just killed me for no reason"

"No reason?"

"Not at all"

"Did it hurt? "

"Course it did"

How did he kill you? I need details.

"Well... He stabbed me. It wasnt quick. He did it slowly as if savouring every drop of blood that seeped from my body. The knife ripped through my skin , I could hear it. I could smell the blood so strongly my head started pounding. And the worst part was his eyes. The look in his eyes as i screamed. He looked pleased, Satisfied. And he wasnt sorry at all. I thought he loved me. Obviously not. There , thats all i have to say." And with that she walked away way to fast for a human being.

"Come back"

She turned

"Why? Why should I? If your trying to find out more gossip about my death then your gonna fail. I have nothing more to say"

"I just wanted to ask if your ok"

"yeah Im great" Her voice was cold and sarcastic.

"Look , you dont have to do this. You can always double die"


"Doble die. Move on. Leave earth. Be free"

"You mean give up."

i did

"No I didnt, Im just saying its a possibility."

"Not gonna happen" Her eyes narrowed

"Ok. Find me if you change your mind"

She frowned and ran off into the distance. I only knew 3 things about that girl

1. She was dead

2. She was killed. Maybe by her boyfriend , maybe not.

3. There was a reason she wanted to stay here amongst the living. And i needed to find out that reason. fast.

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