The Painted Scene

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Can you see this painting?

Lying on the rock is intimidating,
The valley below is claustrophobic,
Flying high is heavenly sweet,
The coffee bean breathes life in me,

Do you see this imagery?

Solice inside the lowly cross,
Laying back in harsh snow,
Finding warm candle light,
At the base of these peaks.

A wall of marble stone, can you see?

The tsunami of green deaf tones,
Flowing like a cool mountain stream,
Never drying is the vertical ferns,
As its under growth ascends.

A painting across this scene!

A choir's blend of music,
Where the fawn finds peace,
By the rolling ridge infringed,
Above that harmonious valley.

Can you see this painted scene?

Submitted: April 28, 2015

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Yes!i could see it!amazing poem!a like!

Sat, May 2nd, 2015 8:54am


Thank you Phoenix8.

Tue, May 5th, 2015 4:50pm

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