The Poem that Never Rhymed *
Poem by: RazzleColaYing
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I can't poetry,
that is something i can't do
I can't write poetry
it beats me black and blue!
nothing i write really rhymes,
it isn't that great, nor very sublime,
cinquan, couplets, haiku, the works!
oh how i despise poetry,
IT DRIVES ME BESERK!
i can't write anything,
i sit down and whine,
ugh ive run out of words that rhyme!
ive given up on poetry,
most of it's luck
i simply CAN'T write poetry
so this is a poem.
Submitted: May 15, 2008
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Oh it's fantastic! But u can write poems AND poetry!!!!! It's great!
Thu, May 15th, 2008 11:41pm
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thank you for the comment! hahah.... i kind of just made it up and coincidentally; it rhymed! =D hahhahah i loved your poem "The Friend" and i seem to like lots of people's poems!
Thu, May 15th, 2008 4:50pm
it seems to me that you CAN write poems!!!
Thu, May 15th, 2008 11:56pm
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Yes, it does!It was very co-incidental!
Thu, May 15th, 2008 11:25pm
But that was a poem.
~Kaori
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Yep! I sort of made it up on the spot, and I usually can't write poems... =]
Thu, May 15th, 2008 11:24pm
RazzleColaYing:
Unusual and entertaining. Gave it an "I Like It" vote.
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
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Thank you! Glad you liked it!
Thu, May 15th, 2008 11:23pm
i am so like you....even mine never rhymes and i am jealous of people whose poems write such lovely poems....thanks for echoing my thoughts as well
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hahah, yes so am i! so i decided to write a bad poem to show the world how frustrating it was not being able to write poetry! it ended up working surprisingly and I hope to write more! thanks for the comment~!
Fri, May 16th, 2008 6:00pm
This is funny and highly contradictory! I love it!
Wed, May 21st, 2008 7:31pm
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thank you!
Mon, May 26th, 2008 3:21am
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA....ha. That was badass. some poems are smart, others are sad, and others are intuitively glum, but this was just badass.
thumbs up
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=) is that good or bad? hahahah
Mon, May 26th, 2008 3:20am
That is funny! But, you CAN write poetry!!!
Thu, May 22nd, 2008 10:25am
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hahah! it was just a fluke! i've been making more up; check out my new one "A Teddy Bear's Picnic"!
Mon, May 26th, 2008 3:19am
this is really good. don't worry if your poems don't rhyme, mine don't either. this is called a free verse. I loved it so keep it up!
KK
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hahah! i will!
Wed, May 28th, 2008 3:47pm
My all time favourite....very very well done.....
Brilliant masterpiece
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hahah... havent you commented on this before? oh well, great to hear from you again!
Sun, June 15th, 2008 1:56am
Okay you lie!!!! You can SO write poetry. See what everybody is saying??? Write more, and tell me when you do. This one's worth a follow-up.
-KB ;)
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:) thank you! i see! haha sure thing, but poetry isn't really my strong point ;) ill keep trying!
Sat, August 9th, 2008 5:24am
Hahaha, that poem made me giggle.
Fri, June 20th, 2008 6:44pm
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:) hehe.... thats good! its supposed to work that way!
Sat, June 21st, 2008 2:01am
haha.
Funny poem
nice writting
:]
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thank you!
Sun, June 22nd, 2008 7:23pm
haaha! this was great! it seems to me that u r a gr8 poet!
Fri, August 15th, 2008 7:58am
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lol.. thanks! :D:D i get that a lot ;)
Fri, August 15th, 2008 3:35am
your a poet and you know it dont pretend you cant rhyme hehe funny poem btw
Sun, September 28th, 2008 10:15pm
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lol thank you!
Sun, September 28th, 2008 4:00pm
hahaa dya kno if u actually say u cant write poetry it makes the reader believe u can anyway. however i do think u actually are better then ppl who think they're the dogs bollox at it. plus it med me giggle so kudos for that xxx
Thu, October 23rd, 2008 7:32pm
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:D thank you! and thank you for the comment!
Thu, October 23rd, 2008 10:02pmFacebook Comments
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