Not so Perfect Land

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Humor  |  House: Booksie Classic


this is a story about a place that seems perfect, but at the heart is awful.

Submitted: September 21, 2017

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Luna was waking hime from her school, Greg High. Her blonde wavey hair fell down next to her as Zach ran by her, she had never liked Zach, but had never hated him either. She was texting her friend Cleo as she reached the bus stop. Today there was a different bus but everyone else was getting on so Luna thought she just didn't know they got a knew bus. SHe went to the back seat with Jasmine, her other friend, who was chatting about some guy she liked. Jasmine liked about just about every guy she met so Luna didn't listen. Her house was the always last but Luna soon relized that the bus missed her stop." Hey my house is back there." She said conserned." I know a know a short cut." He said barley losing his creepy smile."I just saw you pass my house!" She yelled." Just trust me." There was no point in fighting so she sat down and started homework. They went into a new town that was not on the map." Where are we?"" Perfect Land." Luna tried to process that." Thats not on the map." She said quietly to herself. She looked around to see a place that looked like the future, and people there having a huge creepy smile. When the bus stopped the hesitated before stepping off the bus. Everyone starred at her as she walked around. She was directed to the mayor's office. When she arrived she saw a fat man with a smile across his face." Welcome to Perfect Land, we hope you stay a while." His mouth barley moved as he talked." Im actually leaving now." Luna stood up but the mayor waved in two men who reached to grab her. She ran toward the door before they could grab her. When she arrived outside she saw the smiling people walking toward her ready to grab her, Luna ran for what felt like hours barley getting away from reaching arms. Then she saw the town sign as she ran past it. She looked back to see make sure nobody was behind her but saw no town she was at the town limit. When she checked the time no time had passed since she went to Perfect Town. When she got home she said she missed the bus, later on the news she found out there was going to be a new city right next theres. Luna was shocked, the town was going to be a futuristic styled city. It was going to be the happiest place on earth. It was going to be called, Perfect Land.


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