Rejection+ Betrayal= Jealousy Gone Wrong

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
Jealousy is very twisted, murderous feeling. Something that shouldn't be trifled with, especially when its done on purpose.
This is a story about a boy and girl who loved each other. But, chose not to say of how they felt of one another. Big mistake, don't you think?

Submitted: January 12, 2012

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Once upon time, there was a boy and girl.

She loved him, he loved her… but didn’t dare to say anything to her.

He would conversate with her about other “pretty, attractive” girls…

She felt that someone had cut a hole through her chest, and there was no heart to replace it.

She started to hate him, her love that she had for him had turn to hate.

First, she tried to run away. But, her little brother ratted her out.

She felt rejection, like if she was living through her childhood again.

She used to feel that the whole world would froze, when he hugged her, kissed her or even caressed her.

But, now her soul was empty, with darkness filling it in, her heart had no beating or warmth…

Day One. Day Two.

Week One. Week Two.

Month One. Year One…

Years passed by, and he wouldn’t change.

She felt that it was time.

It was time to let people know that all her life she had delt with rejection. With people despising her. With tears in her eyes that has had rolling non-stop from her face, without no one noticing.

It was time to let him know that she was a “somebody” in his world, too.

It was time to let herself take fly, away from this cruel, painful world.

It was time to stop being a “burden” to him anymore.

It was time… she couldn’t take the tension anymore.

Hewillnow remember her…


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