The Unforgettable Ride

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Its basically how a girl feels when she's dating the "boy of her dreams"...
(I know, I know. very girly, but what can i do, i'm a girl.)

When his hand touches mine, I tremble with excitement.

When he grabs my hand, unexpectantly, cold shiver runs down my spine.

When our eyes meet, everything that surrounds me, freezes in time.

In your dark, charcoal eyes, I get lost through darkness... But, when you flash that warm, gentle smile, tranquility sweeps over me.

Reassurring me, that you are not a lost dream encountering my mind.

You are REAL.

('Do you accept this man to be your lawfully wedded husband?'

'I do.'

'You may kiss the bride')

Fire burns through my soul,

when you crash into my lips.

When we draw apart,

the ride is over....

Until, we go on it again.


Submitted: January 15, 2012

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