How To Grow Up

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

How To Grow Up

How To Grow Up
Your path has many footsteps marking the way,
yet for you- this is your first visit.
There are many alternative directions and
choosing your own may seem scary.
There are gentle guiding hands
and some are more pushy, but
it is important that you stop still and
assess your options; take your own steps.
With no one to blame and fall back on,
it is the only way you’ll learn to grow up.
Copyright © Rebecca Snow 2010


Submitted: January 25, 2010

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PaulChafer

Okay, good advice, learning on the learning curve eh!

this line - but it is important is that you stop -

The 'is' needs removing after important I feel. Will scan better that way. Or write - but what is important, is that you stop. Just a thought.
Paul.

Mon, January 25th, 2010 6:47pm

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Typo...comes from editing as I type them up! Silly me. Thanks for flagging it up, will edit :)

Mon, January 25th, 2010 12:30pm

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Mistress of Word Play

Hi Rebecca another wonderful write. You have the best up there proofing for you. Like the lesson in this one. Susan :)

Tue, January 26th, 2010 3:22pm

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Yes I certainly do!! Thanks :)

Tue, January 26th, 2010 11:41am

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NazireC

Very direct, very concise and guiding.
Short but effective.
Your voice is strong and crisp and such a beautiful write.

Mon, February 8th, 2010 4:30am

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Thank you for your kind words. Pleased this came accross in the way you describe.

Mon, April 26th, 2010 11:02am

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