Poem by: rebel
love, passion, sin
Submitted: January 22, 2007
Happiness is comfort.
Comfort is warmth.
Warmth is heat.
Heat is passion.
Passion is love.
Love is beauty.
Beauty is lust.
Lust is treachery.
Treachery is sin.
Sin is completely unavoidable.
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Jeez, you make me want to go to confession. Great link of thoughts.
Haha, thankyou. I guess it turned out to make sense in a way. Glad you liked it...and understood it. LOL.
Isn't that the truth. Very nice little poem!
Thankyou very much SN!
hey---pretty neat--I've never read a poem done that way-love the way you connect each line--good job !
Thankyou very much! I tried to go for a different approach! Cheers!
The last line says it all.
Thank you for the comment. I'm glad you liked it. =]
So true. Haha. No, you're quite welcome. I really enjoyed it.
Hannah K Monash
yeah well, when you put it like that...
LOL, I liked writing this one.
Excellent I forgot what type of writing I called but you did a wonderful way of writing poetry with it. Excellent.
Ahahaha, well when you know, feel free to comment me! And thanks again!
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