a hit at a time

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Editorial and Opinion  |  House: Booksie Classic

if u ever had a hand laid on you unwilling or put a hand on another...read this and think next time

One hit, One bruise, One laugh, One oversized fist in the face, If only someone could take away all the pain in the world, all the men and women that think hitting people make them better make them meaner, but do you want to know what makes all of you who think hitting makes you better..what it really makes you?? Let me tell you it makes you weak, it means you dont have a bone in your body. It means your afraid...because if you think about it hitting is a defense....thats it. One broken bone after another, one tear after another. In the end it could have prevented if everyone would learn to keep their hands of each other, would learn to respect the other person. NO ONE DESERVES TO BE HIT IN ANY WAY. I have many broken bones, im not looking for pitty. Alls im doing is spreading the word that one hit can kill a person. A mom, daughter, son, wife, husband, aunt, unckle, father, ect..  Grow up before you hit a person, because if you had any guts at all you's walk away first.


Submitted: August 13, 2009

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