Respect women. They don't need sympathy but they need respect and love.

What do you think we were?

A toy you played with when little you were.

When you had mood you played with it,

And threw it when you done with it.

Don't you think we were humans, too?

Don't you think we had feelings, too?

This is our message to everyone-

"We don't need your sympathy or your candles after we were raped.

We need your love and respect before you put us in bags,

And threw us in the hashtags.

Like Huh! Today's job is done,

Tomorrow, there will be another one.

Don't think that it's not your problem,

If you don't care, it's gonna be one."


Submitted: March 10, 2019

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Criss Sole

A very serious topic. I liked how you compared a victim to a doll. Great metaphor.

Sun, March 10th, 2019 8:40am

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thank you very much for observing that. I really appriciate it a lot.

Sun, March 10th, 2019 12:45am

RomanBoukreev

I like your metaphors, and the fact that you made this poem without any useless violence. Also, I think that you did mean paedophiles and children, just not a mature raped woman.

Sun, March 10th, 2019 10:51am

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Thank you for the comment. It means a lot to me.

Sun, March 10th, 2019 4:42am

abir roy

Really You have done a great job ...there is acute pain prevails in your poem...and your selection of subject is too good...because we always want to choose romantic one...but few choose such thing ..i really liked this one carry on my friend !!!

There is one thing I want to share with you..
That the mentality is the key factor in such cases...people are too advanced now they don't have any respect for their parents..so how can the respect the women? I know all are not as I said but the generation in which we live there must have a lack of morality as far as the majority is concerned.... I hope we all put our hands together to find out a way in such cases...Thank you ????

Sun, March 10th, 2019 1:04pm

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Thank you,my friend for such a great appriciation. It means a lot to me. I write this poem in a hope that people will on a very tiny level would understand to respect the women. I've read your poems I liked it very much. Thank you once again.

Sun, March 10th, 2019 6:35am

hullabaloo22

This is excellently done, REFRACTOR. From the doll symbolism to the desire not for pity but for respect. There needs to be a very fundamental shift in attitudes for things to change -- with poems that this perhaps there is a slim hope that the necessary change might one day occur.

Sun, March 10th, 2019 7:32pm

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I think slim is better then nothing. Thank you so much for giving it a read. It means a lot to me.

Sun, March 10th, 2019 8:39pm

moa rider

You tackled a difficult subject there Refractor. And a hint that the police still have a lot to learn in the treatment of victims. Usianguke

Sun, March 10th, 2019 7:35pm

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Thank you so much for reading.:-)

Sun, March 10th, 2019 8:33pm

Aniushkania

A difficult and serious problem in our society nowadays. I liked how you expressed the feelings in the poem with great metaphors!

Sun, March 10th, 2019 10:08pm

Author
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Thank you, my friend. It means a lot to me.

Sun, March 10th, 2019 8:31pm

Alexandra Lynsen

Extremely serious choice of topic which I applaud your decision to shine light on. Incredible words to spread your message, not to mention that the message itself is a powerful one. Well done.

Mon, March 11th, 2019 4:08pm

Author
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Thank you so much for giving it a read.
I'll read your writings as soon as I can.

Mon, March 11th, 2019 9:36am

jaylisbeth

Outstanding metaphors, my friend. Such a delicate yet compelling subject.

Tue, March 12th, 2019 1:20pm

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Thank you so much, Beth.

Tue, March 12th, 2019 6:44am

CatWriter

Everything that was mentioned in the poem is spot on!

Tue, May 21st, 2019 9:11am

Muneeb Sohail

sorry for messaging late i was on a break but im back, i like the metaphor it is a crime they destroy someone's innocence if its a kid and if its a women they destroy her respect and many women's have suicide cause of this serious issue women deserve respect and love, this a great poem by a great author

Thu, September 5th, 2019 11:38am

Sharief Hendricks

Excellent message here Refractor!

Crafted with such care and clarity, respect not pity.

This type of work is what is needed to start a change...well done !

Tue, August 18th, 2020 8:51am

zilka.44

More people should read this poem. Subject matter alone, no one ever wants to speak about. Talk about it for there to be change.

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