For Contest:I must turn around
And i must see
You not standing there
Loving me
But I'll never be lonely
As so you are my stars
You are light i must follow
Untill I see
You in front of me
When i see you
AGAIN
-Regan
Submitted: January 31, 2015
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Oh I might of sent you the wrong link check out the one called 14 41 please!
Sat, January 31st, 2015 8:07pm
Short, sweet, and to the point. A couple errors, but those are small and didn't take away the "oomph" of the poem. I like it (: Great work, love.
Mon, February 9th, 2015 5:32pm
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Thanks!
Thu, February 12th, 2015 2:22pmFacebook Comments
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This is good, but can you tell me how it has anything to do with magic or ghosts?
Sat, January 31st, 2015 4:09pmAuthor
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Sorry please read 14 41 instead!
Sat, January 31st, 2015 12:25pm