I am submitting for a contest!

For Contest:I must turn around

And i must see

You not standing there

Loving me

But I'll never be lonely

As so you are my stars

You are light i must follow

  Untill I see

You in front of me

 When i see you





Submitted: January 31, 2015

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Labyrinth Black

This is good, but can you tell me how it has anything to do with magic or ghosts?

Sat, January 31st, 2015 4:09pm


Sorry please read 14 41 instead!

Sat, January 31st, 2015 12:25pm


Oh I might of sent you the wrong link check out the one called 14 41 please!

Sat, January 31st, 2015 8:07pm

Ever A. Darling

Short, sweet, and to the point. A couple errors, but those are small and didn't take away the "oomph" of the poem. I like it (: Great work, love.

Mon, February 9th, 2015 5:32pm



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