Because you are blessed

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Non-Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic


Forget about the black and white skin

No worries for the body, fat or thin

Don’t think about the gapped teeth and fret!

You’re born to cherish this beautiful existence,

Because you are blessed!

 

Let yourself be free of intrigues and jealousies

Muse over Keats’s unheard melodies

Switch to the serenity, be the tranquility’s guest!

You’re born to sightsee the world in you

Because you are blessed!

 

Feel the music of your life

Fight with whatever it brings the strife

They would certainly grab your collar and put you in test!

You’re born to win on them all

Because you are blessed!

 

Raise your spirits up above the high

Wing your soul and touch the sky

Cross the horizons of North, South, East and west!

You’re born to discover your way

Because you are blessed!

 

Seek the beauty of nature with all your sensory powers

Smell the fragrance of petals, taste the honey and all that’s bitter and sour

Caress the softness, soften the harshness by reaching to its nest!

You’re born to relish

Because you are blessed!

 

Don’t be scared if you cannot swim

Just give yourself to the water and let it teach you

No one’s touched the base without kicking off the crest!

You’re born to conquer yourself

Because you are blessed!

 

Live for the moment you are in

You’ve got countless competitions, all to win!

Don’t submit yourself to the fears screaming to their best!

You’re born to kill them all

Because you are blessed!

 

The time you discern yourself and get to know

You’ll have the rhythm, you’ll have the flow

Sing to yourself in the quietness, the stillness!

You’re born to sway within

Because you are blessed!


Submitted: August 05, 2018

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Joy Shaw

Sounds like song lyrics. You could put music to it. Nicely written.

Sun, August 5th, 2018 1:57pm

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Aww how sweet, thanks a lot!

Sun, August 5th, 2018 7:31am

hullabaloo22

A really motivational write, Rehmat.

Sun, August 5th, 2018 6:15pm

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Thanks a lot Hull!!

Sun, August 5th, 2018 11:26pm

TheSinningCrow

Don't take it to heart the difference between winning and losing. I don't want you to think that you lost, and that it is the end of the world. Take a hint from a line in this poem "you've got countless competitions, all to win," because that is you, and it is the confidence for you. You never lose at all, because winning has many forms, from entering, to being the winning poem itself, so you remember that one line you wrote, and that is your self confidence Rehmat. But this poem should of been the winning poem. Fucking judges, they are fucking clueless lol. I will never be blessed become I curse a lot, among other things.

The poem is a powerful vote of self confidence, and it's the looks of a suicide note. A person writes two notes when about themselves. A suicide note if they kill themselves, or a note of confidence. A note like this one is a magical journey, because it means tomorrow is a different day, and it means you can do anything. It gives the person the poise they need, and the heart they need to beat. Excellent and beautiful Rehmat, and remember, you have countless competitions to win ;)

Sun, August 5th, 2018 10:15pm

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Awww you just caught me there haha! Yes!!! That's a vote of self-confidence. I must not worry about competitions because I've got countless yayy Thanks for reminding me dearest! Thank you, I'm smiling!

Sun, August 5th, 2018 11:26pm

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