THE TWO THINGS THAT GO TOGETHER

Reads: 800  | Likes: 0  | Shelves: 0  | Comments: 3

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

EVERYONE SHOULD WALK THROUGH LIFE BRAVELY,SHOULD HAVE COMPLETE FAITH,SINCERITY AND SURRENDER TO GOD...AND THE LIFE WILL BECOME AS BEAUTIFUL AS NATURE

THE TWO THINGS THAT GO TOGETHER

WALK THROUGH LIFE AGAINST ALL FEARS,

TWO THINGS ARE NEEDED THAT GO TOGETHER,

FAITH AND COURAGE COME NEAR,

PRIDE AND SUCCESS GO HIGHER AND HIGHER,

LOVE AND RESPONSIBILITY COME NEAR,

HAPPINESS AND SADNESS GO TOGETHER,

DIFFICULTIESAND FAILURE COME NEAR,

SINCERITY AND SURRENDER GO TOGETHER,

GRACE AND PROTECTION OF GOD COME NEAR.


Submitted: June 02, 2008

© Copyright 2021 rekha luhana. All rights reserved.

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Add Your Comments:

Comments

Pratibha

really heartfelt and brilliant rhyming...
I wish i could write poems with rhymings

Mon, June 9th, 2008 6:43am

Pratibha

I am sorry, don't get me wrong...this one was too deep for me to decipher and in the end i was 100% confused....

"PRIDE AND SUCCESS GO HIGHER AND HIGHER,"

Like this line there several other lines whose meanings went above my poor head,

Tue, June 10th, 2008 12:38am

Pratibha

I came back again because i thought i owe u an explanation regd my confusion.

The theme is superb, no doubt but in the process of trying to get the rhymings correct, u deviated and ultimately common person like me got confused as to 'what exactly u want to say?"

I would again emphasise 'please do not get me wrong'

i would have said nice things and left the page....but later i felt that would be 'unfair'. u r writing for people to read and appreciate and i am sure u would take this as purely 'my' opinion.....

others might like this very very much....and love it...

Tue, June 10th, 2008 8:59pm

Facebook Comments

Other Content by rekha luhana