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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

don't be deceived on what the world offers, it is all temporary

By: Remie Torregosa


Stirrin' up your head on what you sees

Putting to yourself what the world believes

Wearin' this heavy mask to make you in

Even if it's not really you deep within


Storing to yourself the world's beauty

Until you drawn up to feel self pitty

Thinking everything you do must please them

For you to be recognize and gain fame


But what are these things for you to settle

Just a factor of this world to battle

All that's in the world are temporary

It'll not even affect you heavily


So take off these nonsense masks you're wearing

Be true to yourself and stop Tearing

Shake it off and leave it all behind you

Accept to yourself the fact and truth, That's you


Unmask yourself and make a difference

And soon You'll realize what's confidence

Gaining it have a very great effect

Your light will shine on the others deffect

Submitted: November 20, 2014

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I like that it tears at something all to common nowadays about people just hide themselves just to be socially accepted.

Thu, November 20th, 2014 7:30am


yeah, that's true . . thank you!

Tue, November 25th, 2014 12:33am

Lane Davis

This is almost lyrical. Thank you for sharing.

Thu, November 20th, 2014 10:00pm


thank you also.

Tue, November 25th, 2014 12:32am

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