This is for all of you who will do anything to gain power

We want it
We need it
Some of us
Will do anything
For it.
Kill for it
If we must
Die for it
If needed to
It is hard to gain
But so easy 
For it to be taken
So all who read this
You should know
When you gain power
Whether by fear or strength
Do what ever it takes
To keep it for yourself

Submitted: May 28, 2007

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Rabbid Rabbit

Oh. very different poem there mate. Interesting sentiment you have there.

Interestingly abrupt. Very to the point.

though there is one small piece i feel needs a little attention
"Will do anything
For it."

Just there it seems to stumble a little. In my opinion its missing something.
Perhaps you can try altering the flow with more punctuation or and extra well place word.
PS more punctuation as a whole might not be a bad idea. The whole thing only has one lonely stop(.).

As always. Just a thought

Thu, July 12th, 2007 4:26pm

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