My Entry - The Intro Challenge (melanielegge)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is my entry for Melanie's INTRO challenge. I wanted to write a short story, but I won't have the time. So the Intro will just have to get you making up your own stories. :D

They were setting the table for breakfast, trying to ignore the echoes reverberating through both of their minds of the sounds of what had happened the night before. The tension could be cut with a knife, both of them highly aware of each other, neither admitting it. Yesterday they had been best friends. Now they weren’t sure what they were anymore, but both knew the truth; two couples sharing a hotel room was not a good idea.


Submitted: July 14, 2009

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melanielegge

Ha ha! I love it! Short and sweet. This is a great intro because you have captured the atmosphere of the scene brilliantly in one line: “both of them highly aware of each other, neither admitting it” which was what I really wanted to see! Little one liners like that that say it all. Well done … if you decide to go on with this story, please do let me know, I’d love to read it! ;o) I will also make the effort to read some more of your stuff! Thank you for your entry!

(full results and winners etc have been posted in 'intro challenge, results')

Sun, July 26th, 2009 2:33pm

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