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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

i love this feel of love,,,when a lot is said and to be said,between two beings,,,and a sweet love feel ,,love in air feel is around,,,,,,



Kuch ankahi si teri aankhon mein bhi hai,

Kuch ankahi si meri baton mein bhi hai,

Chalna hai in raston pe hume humkadam hoke,


Phir bhi,

Kuch there se kadam tere bhi hain ,mere  bhi,

Roshni si hai raston mein  bikhri ,

Nazaron ne bhi karvaten li hain,

Phir bhi,

Kuch thame se badal teri aankhon mein bhi hain ,mere aankhon mein  bhi,

Lafz bhi zuban ka sath nahi dete,

Mehsoos karte hain hum phir bhi nahi kehte,

Samajhna tum bhi chahte ho ,samajhna hum bhi chahte hain,


Phir bhi,

Kuch there se  jazbaat tere  bhi hain,mere bhi,

Khamosh ye nazren hain,

Muskurahten si hain cheron pe ,

Phir bhi,

Kuch ankahi si teri aankhon mein bhi ,meri aankhon mein bhi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,



Submitted: October 02, 2011

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Very nice...! I'm deeply touched by it... Here's a word of advice, do upload an audio as well..

Mon, October 3rd, 2011 10:06am



Mon, October 3rd, 2011 10:16am


"Kuch ankahi teri ankhon mein bhi...meri ankhon mein bhi"...WOW!!!:D MAde my evening

Mon, October 3rd, 2011 2:21pm


thnx buddie

Mon, October 3rd, 2011 2:30pm


Very delicate write.You portryed the moments very nicely!
Thanks for sharing. SW

Mon, October 3rd, 2011 2:56pm

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