BAAT ADHOORI RAHI

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

POEM POTRAYS TWO PEOPLE WHO COME ACROSS MANY A TIMES IN LIFE BUT STILL CAN'T SAY TO EACH OTHER ,WHAT THEY WANTED TO SAY
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Baat adhori hi rahi, aur lo PHIR YE raat guzar chali,

din ke ujalon mein mujhe teri-tujhe meri woh surat na pehle si mili,

BAAT ADHORI hi RAHI, AUR LO PHIR YE RAAT GUZAR CHALI,………

 

AATE jate yun to milte rahe HUM, magar,

Kabhi tum na keh sake the, kabhi hum na sun paye,

BAAT ADHORI hi RAHI, AUR LO PHIR YE RAAT GUZAR CHALI,……..

 

Ehsas tamam tujhe mujhse-mujhe tujhse bandhte rahe yun to,

jinhe,

kabhi tum na mehsoos kar sake, to kabhi hum na zahir kar paye,

BAAT ADHORI hi RAHI, AUR LO PHIR YE RAAT GUZAR CHALI,…….

 

Shakhon pe mausam yahan badalte rahe kayi,

Magar,

Kabhi tum khoye the , kabhi hum  na mil paye ,

BAAT ADHORI hi RAHI, AUR LO PHIR YE RAAT GUZAR CHALI,……….

 

 

 

 

 

Kaash waqt de mauhlat phirse ,

baatein kuch aur darmiyan chalen,

Phir koi raat aesi dhale, 

aur baatein adhoori who jo rahin,

fasana tera -mera bane………….:)

 

 

 

 


Submitted: April 03, 2012

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Tuppa

Richa- Aab baat puri ho gayi, adhoori nahi rahi. Aap ne padnaa ka liya bola, main naa par liya. ha ha ha. Hope you are doing good. came back after a long time and looked on your request. You don't need an appreciation when you write a poety. It reflects your mastery. Keep it up.

Thu, April 12th, 2012 11:31pm

pankajrawat

jo adhoori reh gayi use puri kar lo..........
nice yaar atleast koi to hai jo hindi me hai.....

Thu, April 26th, 2012 1:39pm

Basilia

simply superb!! you are very good at shayari which absolutely sounds like song :) good work

Sun, May 13th, 2012 12:08pm

Vikrant

A lovely song reminding me the song, 'Hai ajeeb dastan ye hamari dastan bhi, kabhi hum suna na paye kabhi tum samajh na paye.' Your as-aar are fascinating, think I should read rest of'em.

Sun, May 27th, 2012 3:42pm

Rajesh Gautam

Your poem touched my heart. I felt that this is my story. How you wrote my story with your pen. May I know when was this poem created. However congratulations for touching my feelings. Thanks a lot.

Tue, January 16th, 2018 12:25pm

Rajesh Gautam

I am also on booksie with Name Rajesh Gautam please read me and comment. Thanks

Fri, January 19th, 2018 5:31am

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