LOVE BURNS BRIGHT, poem by rickyengland

LOVE BURNS BRIGHT

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Poem by: rickyengland

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This is my second Haiku. Here goes....

Submitted: February 14, 2008

A A A | A A A

Submitted: February 14, 2008

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Love burns bright

She lights a candle,

Eyes reflect its amber flame

Glowing, flickering

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Nixie

Comment | 2 words

Fri, February 15th, 2008 3:26am

Beautiful! ~ Nixie

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Fri, February 15th, 2008 4:07pm

I'm honoured by your word. Thank you Nic.Ricky.

Brian Peza Perrins

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Fri, February 15th, 2008 4:57am

Nice piece Ricky

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Comment | 25 words

Fri, February 15th, 2008 4:10pm

Thanks Brian. The Haiku learning curve is still steep for me, but that's all part of the challenge. Look forward to more of yours. Ricky.

air

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Fri, February 15th, 2008 8:07am

Pretty darn good Ricky (smile)*

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Fri, February 15th, 2008 4:11pm

Glad ya think so!! (smile exchanged) Ricky.

Evelyn Ward

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Fri, February 15th, 2008 9:58am

I liked it Ricky. Seems to me it packs a lot of meaning into a few words. Haiku at its best.

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Fri, February 15th, 2008 4:13pm

Thanks Evelyn. They are fun to try, and a good discipline also, aren't they? Ricky.

gerabel

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Fri, February 15th, 2008 10:17am

There you go again... a second, first rate haiku!! Good work, Ricky. It's nice not only to see other poets writing Haiku but seeing the Booksie readership enjoying them so much! I'm working on a couple more for future posting. Happy writing.....Jerry

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Fri, February 15th, 2008 4:14pm

Thankyou Jerry, my Haiku-mentor-extraordinaire!!! Ricky.