LOVE BURNS BRIGHT

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is my second Haiku. Here goes....

Love burns bright

She lights a candle,

Eyes reflect its amber flame

Glowing, flickering


Submitted: February 15, 2008

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Nixie

Beautiful! ~ Nixie

Fri, February 15th, 2008 11:26am

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I'm honoured by your word. Thank you Nic.Ricky.

Fri, February 15th, 2008 4:07pm

Brian Peza Perrins

Nice piece Ricky

Fri, February 15th, 2008 12:57pm

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Thanks Brian. The Haiku learning curve is still steep for me, but that's all part of the challenge. Look forward to more of yours. Ricky.

Fri, February 15th, 2008 4:10pm

air

Pretty darn good Ricky (smile)*

Fri, February 15th, 2008 4:07pm

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Glad ya think so!! (smile exchanged) Ricky.

Fri, February 15th, 2008 4:11pm

Evelyn Ward

I liked it Ricky. Seems to me it packs a lot of meaning into a few words. Haiku at its best.

Fri, February 15th, 2008 5:58pm

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Thanks Evelyn. They are fun to try, and a good discipline also, aren't they? Ricky.

Fri, February 15th, 2008 4:13pm

gerabel

There you go again... a second, first rate haiku!! Good work, Ricky. It's nice not only to see other poets writing Haiku but seeing the Booksie readership enjoying them so much! I'm working on a couple more for future posting. Happy writing.....Jerry

Fri, February 15th, 2008 6:17pm

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Thankyou Jerry, my Haiku-mentor-extraordinaire!!! Ricky.

Fri, February 15th, 2008 4:14pm

mum55

Really great Haiku ........such meaning in so few words...excerllent...Till later Juliet

Fri, February 15th, 2008 11:21pm

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Your words are appreciated Juliet, and I will read your story
this weekend, now I have time. Ricky.

Fri, February 15th, 2008 4:15pm

Svetlana

charming

Sun, February 17th, 2008 1:53am

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Thankyou Svetlana! Ricky.

Sat, February 16th, 2008 6:50pm

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