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Nice piece Ricky
Fri, February 15th, 2008 12:57pm
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Thanks Brian. The Haiku learning curve is still steep for me, but that's all part of the challenge. Look forward to more of yours. Ricky.
Fri, February 15th, 2008 4:10pm
Pretty darn good Ricky (smile)*
Fri, February 15th, 2008 4:07pm
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Glad ya think so!! (smile exchanged) Ricky.
Fri, February 15th, 2008 4:11pm
I liked it Ricky. Seems to me it packs a lot of meaning into a few words. Haiku at its best.
Fri, February 15th, 2008 5:58pm
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Thanks Evelyn. They are fun to try, and a good discipline also, aren't they? Ricky.
Fri, February 15th, 2008 4:13pm
There you go again... a second, first rate haiku!! Good work, Ricky. It's nice not only to see other poets writing Haiku but seeing the Booksie readership enjoying them so much! I'm working on a couple more for future posting. Happy writing.....Jerry
Fri, February 15th, 2008 6:17pm
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Thankyou Jerry, my Haiku-mentor-extraordinaire!!! Ricky.
Fri, February 15th, 2008 4:14pm
Really great Haiku ........such meaning in so few words...excerllent...Till later Juliet
Fri, February 15th, 2008 11:21pm
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Your words are appreciated Juliet, and I will read your story
this weekend, now I have time. Ricky.
charming
Sun, February 17th, 2008 1:53am
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Thankyou Svetlana! Ricky.
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Beautiful! ~ Nixie
Fri, February 15th, 2008 11:26amAuthor
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I'm honoured by your word. Thank you Nic.Ricky.
Fri, February 15th, 2008 4:07pm