love like an angel

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

a poem i wrote i hope you like it, this is my first time writting a poem!!! so please dont hat:) thanks


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Submitted: April 19, 2012

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Andrey Pipchenko

This is very good, good job :)

Fri, April 20th, 2012 12:58am

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Thanks wow!!!! i felt like i just got applaud by a famous poetry writer!!!! you are amazing with poetry thanks and this is the first poem i have written so thanks!!! ;)

Sun, April 22nd, 2012 6:58am

Almost

OMG, this is amazing !!

Sat, April 21st, 2012 8:25pm

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thanks i really appreciate it!!! my first poem:/ i hope its good:)

Sat, April 21st, 2012 10:41pm

nathanmarc12

I like it a lot. It's very sweet and innocent. The last line was amazing. Great job ! :)

Sun, April 22nd, 2012 6:52am

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Thank you so much! glad you took the etime to comment thanks im so happy you liked it:)

Sun, April 22nd, 2012 6:52am

Irwinagain

1st or 50th poem, it's very good. Look forward to reading more of your work.

Tue, April 24th, 2012 12:28pm

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thank you im not that much of a writer in poetry or anything else....... and it,s my 1st poem

Tue, April 24th, 2012 10:46am

Almost

i can't stop reading it.. its you'r first ???!? omg so f!cking good ;3 :D

Tue, April 24th, 2012 8:26pm

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yes, it is in fact my first im glad you liked it:)

Wed, April 25th, 2012 4:22pm

Pharaoh888

Very sweet ^_^ I like how you express the feeling with such heart comforting words. Good one!

Thu, April 26th, 2012 12:25pm

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thanks:)

Thu, April 26th, 2012 6:21am

Brian W

http://www.dailytext.org/love-poems/your-touch-is-with-me-always/
A link posted in 2009 I think you may find interesting...

Thu, April 26th, 2012 11:41pm

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Thanks..

Fri, April 27th, 2012 12:18pm

meriddle

Love it! Mike

Sat, May 5th, 2012 8:34pm

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thx

Sat, May 5th, 2012 1:54pm

brucek

very impressed for your first. good instincts on going with every other line for your rhyme scheme, and you have a nice feel for the rhythm of you lines. let's see another!

Sun, May 6th, 2012 1:23pm

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thanks

Mon, May 7th, 2012 12:58pm

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