Forbidden!

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

wrote it at the time i was falling for someone i couldn't be with

Maybe I'll pretend not to love you, so the memories of you and I will vanish from your mind,
yet how can i pretend not to love you when my feelings for you are iced boxed in my heart.
How can i pretend when I'm aware of your own deep feelings for me as well,
but i have to pretend so that you will pretend,
so that we can erase all that we have/had
because our love is forbidden
!


Submitted: February 19, 2010

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nice lol... I saw it and had a giggle... cause it was my pen name lol... but I'm just being silly cause I am board at work

Tue, April 13th, 2010 5:03am

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lol...
well I'm glad you enjoyed it

Mon, April 12th, 2010 11:29pm

Fleur Elizabeth

Since I have read only one other piece of literature that you've written and compare only the two, I must say that this appeared and read through much easier. Your ideas were clearer and it definately shows that you put much thought into the orginization and writing of this poem. 5 stars.

Sun, May 16th, 2010 12:02am

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wow thanks!
and honestly coming from you means alot!
i read your about me section you have lot of knowledge bout writing....
thanks for taking a look at something different

Sat, May 15th, 2010 5:56pm

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