Apple pie

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This poem is short and sweet.

Give me a slice of apple pie with some cheese.

It tastes delicious and it's sure to please.

It's the tastiest thing I've ever put in my mouth.

You make the greatest apple pie in the south.


Submitted: August 13, 2007

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Treshawna

sighs of disappointment> I don't understand the concept of your work. It's very annoying in a way to me and childish. If you want to get good comments i think you should write something that everyone can relate to, that's either sad or happy. I can say that i can't identify with any of your work. But guess what i love apple pie Lol. (this poem is an exception)

Fri, August 17th, 2007 12:19am

MysticAngel Eyes

After readint this it amde me want soem apple pie..good job.

Fri, August 17th, 2007 7:52pm

HaloKarou

Nice Job, dude! Treshawana, that wasn't very nice to say. His work is his work! Besides, apple pie is yummy! Chao, Kawaii~Sama

Fri, December 4th, 2015 1:23am

Writer of the world

Good but should have been bigger

Mon, December 12th, 2016 4:44am

Celtic-Scribe63

I love apple pie, not sure about the cheese, though! give me custard any day.

Fri, November 22nd, 2019 10:20pm

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