Poem by: RJohnson
Submitted: August 13, 2007
Give me a slice of apple pie with some cheese.
It tastes delicious and it's sure to please.
It's the tastiest thing I've ever put in my mouth.
You make the greatest apple pie in the south.
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sighs of disappointment> I don't understand the concept of your work. It's very annoying in a way to me and childish. If you want to get good comments i think you should write something that everyone can relate to, that's either sad or happy. I can say that i can't identify with any of your work. But guess what i love apple pie Lol. (this poem is an exception)
After readint this it amde me want soem apple pie..good job.
Nice Job, dude! Treshawana, that wasn't very nice to say. His work is his work! Besides, apple pie is yummy! Chao, Kawaii~Sama
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