Rape is wrong

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I hope this poem will convince men not to commit rape.

If you're considering committing rape, please don't do it.

It causes a lot of pain and nobody deserves to go through it.

You wouldn't commit rape if you knew how it makes the victims feel.

They suffer tremendously and it takes a long time for them to heal.

If you're considering committing rape, I have a message for you and you better not ignore it.

Rape is wrong and evil and if you commit it, you will go to prison for it.


Submitted: August 15, 2007

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Nate

Your writing is somewhat abrasive.

Wed, August 15th, 2007 11:13pm

Tokemies

You know, most of the rapes are committed because of revenge. Rapers usually want to hurt and humiliate the victim. This is just like you would tell those sick minds: "Go rape, it's just what you need!"

Thu, August 16th, 2007 4:40pm

Treshawna

Ok dear- time to be honest.

This poem is lacking power and emotion. This sounds like a mother telling her child never to commit rape because it's bad. We here on booksie wanna see truth in the poems, emotions, sadness, emotive language and to an extent make us wanna cry. THIS TO ME IS BULL-SHIT

sorry to be so cruel but i just always say whats on my mind. Hope that my criticism can allow you to improve your poems.

*Thank you*

Treshawna

Fri, August 17th, 2007 12:15am

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