Lonely star

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I wrote it in English for a competition.

Lonely star


I'm just a lonely star,

that hates the way things are.

I'm trapped in the dead of space,

That really is a desolate place.

But my molten heart does sing,

As I look down at everything.

Earth is wonderful, beautiful too,

With continents green, and splashes of blue.

Brewing storms and clouds of white,

Summers day, winters night.

Oh I wish I could visit you,

on your little planet of blue.

But for now I'll just sit a weep,

Watching the earth fall to sleep.

Submitted: June 08, 2010

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Ok, for some reason Booksie isn't allowing me to post a comment on your page so I thought I'd just post a comment here! Ok, so I updated another chapter of Beating The Player At His Own Game! I hope you like it and don't forget to comment! :O)? XOXO ~Cmore

P.S I read this poem and to put it lightly, it touched me deeply. It's... I'm speechless. I really love this poem, it's undescribable! I'm really glad I took the time to read it. I hope you won the compotetion! :O)

Mon, October 4th, 2010 3:42pm


Aww thank you! I'm speechless too: it means a lot that you think that. I'm glad I won too :P
I'll go read your book now.

Mon, October 4th, 2010 7:04pm

unknown girl

You really got the talent and you must use it more often. This is a great poem and you have pictured the star's thoughts pretty well (if it has any, lol). This is awesome. I hope to see more of these. Well written :D

Sun, March 6th, 2011 5:03am


awww thanks! It means so much to me that my work is apprechiated so you've just made my day/night!!!
thank you so much for reading!!!

Sun, March 6th, 2011 9:20am


nice piece. I really wish I would rhyme and my pieces still make sense like your do. Please check out my work. -CJam

Tue, June 7th, 2011 9:24pm


aww thank you! I'm sure your pieces are just as good, if not better than this :) I will if I get chance to!
Thanks for commenting!

Wed, June 8th, 2011 9:37am

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