When silly things are said and done

 

Angels

 

Angels come and change our lives

In ways we can't imagine

They open our eyes

And touch the heart

But in the end...

They must depart

 

NO

 

Fight for your angel

Make her stay

Your heart has long since felt this way

Look into her eyes

See the pain

Understand the confusion

Dry the rain

 

Such great friends

Such great lovers

Is this really how it ends

 

Angels run

They hide away

They close their hearts

And refuse to stay

 

Understand you fool

She wants to stay

Stop pushing

Stop forcing her away

 

Im sorry my angel

i caused you pain

lets learn from this

and try again

 


Submitted: June 11, 2007

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ddrandall

I have had a few such angels over the course of my life... I would like to think I am smarter now in how I deal with them... nice piece of writing here... I really liked it... write on my friend!!

Mon, June 11th, 2007 3:24pm

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thank you for the compliments, im not sure if ill ever become smater in my dealings, but hopefully the day will come that it will be the heart that rules and smartness is not a factor

Kind regards

robin

Tue, June 12th, 2007 10:08am

EdwardJBradleySr

Robin M Swart:

Well written and effective expression of tender emotions. And of how to nurture the people who engender them in us. Good job. Gave it a "5".

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Mon, June 11th, 2007 4:54pm

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Mr. Bradley,

Thank you for the complimentary review, it is always good to have other peoples opinion of your work, especially when it is positive

Kind regards
Robin

Tue, June 12th, 2007 10:04am

Sunnyson

Beautiful use of laungage,
deep expressive poem. I enjoyed the read.

Wed, June 13th, 2007 10:19pm

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