Lost the love of my life

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just a short poem that i wrote when my girl friend broke up with me i've wrote way better i just couldnt think of much at the time.

Submitted: March 03, 2008

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The sunset sets over the water as i saw your face dim away. you said you loved me and you'd never leave but as i can see they were just words of pain

that wont seem to leave me. I wanted us to last forever and beyond. You wouldn't tell me the reason of why you left which even makes it worse knowing i did

something rong but you wont tell me what it is. The tears are running down my face like rain and flowing into an endless river of sorrow. My heart has been

shattered for it'll never be mended again cause i gave you all the love i had and when you left me it went with you. The days seem to be getting shorter without

you by myside. My friends are there they say to move on but how can i move on when i lost the girl i wanted to move on with. I needed her to get through my days

of life and now she's gone so i am strugleing with my life now. I would ask you to come back and give me one more chance but im sure you have found

someone now  ,so best of luck to you and i'll always love you for you were the dream that became a nightmare in my eyes. Love ya till the end and forever!!!!!!


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