Willow

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Just a poem I wrote for a writing class.

Branches swaying in the breeze
Giving a sweet embrace
Peaceful relaxing serenity
Chickadees chirping a song of hope
Daydreaming offers solitude
Summer days forever remembered.

Submitted: April 10, 2007

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yodellingbren

Hi there
I really like this poem. The rhythm really evokes the waving of willow branches. Thanks for a good read!
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YB

Wed, April 11th, 2007 12:22am

Just Dead

Simple and effective, short, and really nicely flowing. Good use of empathy, i could really hear the chickadees.

-Just Dead. :3

Wed, April 11th, 2007 12:30am

ghost writer

Very simple yet elegantly written. It portrays a vivid visual of an actual willow tree.

Wed, April 11th, 2007 4:49am

Emma Lou

Great job, I love willows in the summer.

Wed, April 11th, 2007 5:06am

Wilson

Great job. Love the chickadees.

Wed, April 11th, 2007 5:44pm

bennywriter

Simple and beautiful. I too have a love for the weeping willows. They seem magical in a way, atleast when your a kid. They are beautiful.

Fri, May 4th, 2007 4:59pm

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