one last kiss(short version)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

i cry as blood drips from my fingers i grab the blade and make another cut next to the first

i cry as blood drips from my finger tips i pick  up the blade and make another cut next to

the first the blood comes more quickly this time i think i hit a vien i should stop but i cant

the blood wont end the pain goes on i feel my knees getting weak they collaps out from

under me the door to the bathroom flies open he rushes in and pulls me into his arms

a low cry escapes my lips he sobs loudly im sorry i mouthed my vioce wont work his tears

mix with my blood as if it were a crimson tide pool i lay in his arms as he cries i soon feel my

conciousness slipping i love you i whisper horasly into his ear he pulls me to his chest and

leans his head down for one last kiss


Submitted: February 05, 2009

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angelmona

awww that was sad and sweet

Sat, May 30th, 2009 2:19am

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thnx i think thats kewl but what eva im so bored im working on posting more work but hey if u get the chance soon read the other version its longer and better i erased the short version and added the long

Sat, May 30th, 2009 6:18am

angelmona

awww that was sad and sweet

Sat, May 30th, 2009 2:19am

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OK

Sun, May 31st, 2009 6:24am

angelmona

lol for some reason my computer doesn't want to post the whole comment down so im gonna write it again: so i was saying that u sure know how to express ur feelings, also this poem was told like a story and it was realy good ^_^ i knew that adding u as a fan was worth it XD

Sat, May 30th, 2009 2:21am

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OK

Sun, May 31st, 2009 6:24am

rosalieemo

hey anyone who reads this its rose the auther u might try one last kiss the longer and better version ull like it more i promise

Sat, May 30th, 2009 5:02pm

hhhh

Sweetness! I guess I have to read the longer one to get the full effect, but what I have read so far is pretty good!

Sat, May 30th, 2009 9:49pm

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thnx i think i was like you kno i was acctually happy when i wrote this i was just bored

Sun, May 31st, 2009 6:05am

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