The Power of Love & Hate are both very very very strong!

(I wrote this when i was in high school and have done minimum changes)

The Power of Love & Hate!
The power of love & hate
Is an inevitable destined fate
You can choose which one you seek
But it’s impossible to know which one you can beat
Hate is a feeling that gives you uncontrollable power
A desire of angry that’s enriched within an hour
You have this intense feeling that you think is very strong
It feels so damn good but it doesn’t last very long
Because you fight for yourself and care for only you
You have this unexceeding power that takes over you too
But love is a feeling of an encouraging light
It’s a feeling of all sorts of wondrous delight
At times it may not feel as strong as hate
But I can bet you the fights’ going to be straight
Love is powerful, because you just won’t give up
No matter what you feel, you just won’t ever stop
Unlike love hate is a fear
That brings lots of unwanted heart-wrenching tears
You may feel torn and all broken up inside
You fight until you’ve had it, cuz you just don’t wanna die
In love you feel the will to never give up
You fight for someone else and won’t ever shut up
Even though you may feel that you’re not very strong
That your body has had it and you just cannot go on
You’ll find that will-power that’s shining extremely bright
And you won’t ever stop until you've won THAT FIGHT
See hate is a reckless untamable power
But love is something that you strongly desire
Whether you fight for yourself or you fight for others
No matter which one it is, you’re fighting with GREAT POWER
I bet your wondering which one I think is great
Believe me……its love not hate


Submitted: June 13, 2011

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Khano

Yes these words are indeed gripping as well well as true to the core

Mon, June 13th, 2011 8:11pm

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thank! boo-yah!

Mon, June 13th, 2011 1:23pm

darkism

really great, i liked it

Mon, June 13th, 2011 11:17pm

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yes! success!

Mon, June 13th, 2011 5:51pm

whiteroses

This is really nice!
Keep up the good work hun!
xoxoxo

Tue, June 14th, 2011 2:24am

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gracias chika!

Mon, June 13th, 2011 8:44pm

orchdork4ever

Well written! I love how you go back and forth, first decribing hate then love and so forth. It really gives a nice contrast to the poem. And the color is brilliant. you're imagery is awesome. Keep up the good work!:D

Tue, June 14th, 2011 5:06am

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thank you very very much most flattering comment yet! :)

Mon, June 13th, 2011 11:03pm

arun

The one on one between love and hate is never ending. It started the day since bipeds started to think!

Ha ha, Miyuki, I must admit, that was really a powerful poem. So powerful that it keeps the reader glued to seat! That was a great poem. Kmu if you add anything new...

Wed, June 15th, 2011 4:13am

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much obliged partner!

Wed, June 15th, 2011 4:39am

Koshka

i like it, that was really good:D ii like the figurative language in it, it was descriptive and well written and composed:) good job:DD

Fri, June 17th, 2011 5:40pm

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gracias!

Fri, June 17th, 2011 11:23am

xXxTallahasseexXx

:O THE RUMOR IS TRUE! THIS IS AMAZING!

Fri, June 17th, 2011 6:04pm

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now you see not all rumors are lies

Fri, June 17th, 2011 11:26am

peoplehateme101

amazing!!!!!!!! this is really good!! da rumor is true!! can you be a dear and come check out some of my stuff????? pwease???? pretty pwease????

Fri, June 17th, 2011 11:15pm

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absolutly positively

Fri, June 17th, 2011 4:26pm

fresh spirits

You have chosen a breathtaking title where the words are well expressed.I loved it.

Sat, June 18th, 2011 12:09am

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Awwww!

Fri, June 17th, 2011 5:26pm

Naminesfriend

I really liked this poem, it can teach a lesson to people who don't understand the line between love and hate. I think instead of "Desire of angry" it should be "Desire of anger" But that isn't really relevant. Great poem!

Sat, June 18th, 2011 8:21pm

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gracias! it might have been a typo anWays i'l reread it and once again MUCHOS GRACIAS!

Sat, June 18th, 2011 1:35pm

DGNAForever

I love this. It's so complex. You are a good writer.

Mon, June 20th, 2011 5:55pm

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Thanks chika

Mon, June 20th, 2011 3:24pm

Summer Forever

This is really good, I can feel the emotion you put into this. You have very good diction as well. Good job :)

Mon, June 20th, 2011 7:44pm

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oh oh blushie blushie

Mon, June 20th, 2011 3:31pm

Haley Renee

Very Good! I loved it! :)

Tue, June 21st, 2011 1:40am

Kenedi

I wuv this!

Tue, June 21st, 2011 3:07am

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thanks chika

Mon, June 20th, 2011 8:16pm

MishIsAwkward

Lovely ^^

Tue, June 21st, 2011 5:50am

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aww thanks for saying it truely was ledgendary much appriciated

Tue, June 21st, 2011 7:56am

littlemissromance13

I have to say that this is a very well written poem.
It takes a lot of talent to write good poetry and I say you have it!
Very powerful piece and it really shows Love and Hate well.
Good job, love!
xoxo

Tue, June 21st, 2011 7:10am

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i'll take a bow. thanks!

Tue, June 21st, 2011 7:57am

animilia

Amazing, and heart wrenching!!!!!!!! Great job! exellent!

Tue, June 21st, 2011 1:29pm

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that was the job and thank you animilia

Tue, June 21st, 2011 8:02am

StephanieJane303

Beautiful. I like it! Great job(:

Tue, June 21st, 2011 3:55pm

hoplessromantic

this is awesome! its deep and describing and just awesome!!! XD

Tue, June 21st, 2011 11:44pm

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awesome!

Tue, June 21st, 2011 5:18pm

vampirebreather

very very very good! xxx kmu on any more poems!!!!! xxx

Sun, June 26th, 2011 3:51pm

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kk

Sun, June 26th, 2011 10:52am

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