The poem that I wrote is about how people get bullied and that the bully doesn't think about what's on the inside and the bully only thinks whats on the outside.

The Moonshine

The moon may be different shapes

The moon may be gray

But it still glows as bright as your heart

Submitted: April 15, 2012

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So sweet!! I have a 'thing' for the moon you know... have a listen to Bruno Mars - talking to the moon. Nicely done .. M

Sat, May 5th, 2012 3:49pm


My older dorissa has the middle name moon.Thank you for reading my poem.hugs and kisses-Roses

Sat, May 5th, 2012 6:13pm


I really like the moon and the stars - there's something emotional about them and they look so pretty in the night sky... Anyway I really like this. The imagery is beautiful and it's a really clever metaphor for the inner beauty that you are portraying. Keep writing :)

Sun, June 17th, 2012 10:38pm


thanks it means alot.

Mon, June 18th, 2012 3:00pm

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