Part Of A Story

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Action and Adventure  |  House: Booksie Classic
this is a chapter of an unfinished story i wrote a while back but didnt think it good enough.i will appreciate it if you critique it as viciously as possible so i can make my writing better :)

Submitted: November 28, 2011

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She was at a point where she couldn’t hold the knife back any longer. Her hand was bleeding from grabbing it too hard and the blood was dripping down her neck, feeling warm on her cool skin. She whimpered, tears spilling down her cheeks but her mother kept bringing the point of the knife towards her neck while her dad pinned her down on the kitchen counter. It crossed her mind again and again that she wasn’t good enough, that was the whole reason this was happening to her. She deserved it. They gave birth to her so maybe it’s their right to kill her if they didn’t want her anymore. She let go of the knife and her dad grabbed her other arm as well and pulled her down harder. If she was going to die, she had better watch it in the eye or in this case her mother’s eyes. She looked her straight in the eye, something she had never done before all her life. Her brown eyes were glinting with mirth, her lips crooked in a malicious smile and her black hair all over her shoulders. Fire and pain pierced through her along with the knife. She closed her eyes; she just couldn’t watch her death at the hands of her mother. She let out a cry and at the same time felt the knife and her father both pull back. She opened her eyes and there was nobody around. It was just her in the empty kitchen.
 
No, it couldn’t have been a dream! She felt her neck which was hurting painfully and sure enough it was bleeding heavily. The blood covered the whole front of her shirt and the belt of her jeans. She felt woozy and fell on the warm kitchen floor. The last thing she saw before closing her eyes was the knife covered in her blood lying on the floor.


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