I wrote this by just writing exactly what came into my head. I didn't think about it, or change it.

Shrouded in the devils scene

The motions move, they’re breaking me

Ancestors come, they rise and fall

The scared spirit watches all

When heavens run, and heavens call

Your name, the writing on the wall

And out of fiction came to be

His devils cup, his sanity

When all is one and one is all

Your mind. Your weapon

Tracing all

Vibrations hide a hidden key

It rises, falls and haunts us three

Like trinity, like soul and keeper

The vain body of this helpless sleeper

Risen angels fall again

Battles always lost, not won

And now the door is opening

Is opening to you

And now the door is opening

And now they wait for you


Submitted: March 01, 2009

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Good Idea; writing what comes into your head.
This flows so nicely, tells a story, good rhyming
treatment, and a great read. Fantastic!
Kind regards M.

Sun, March 1st, 2009 1:48pm


Thankyou x

Sun, March 1st, 2009 7:08am


Awesome write Rox, Take care Chiqui

Sun, March 1st, 2009 9:32pm


Thankyou for commenting an all my stuff Chiqui! Nice one x

Sun, March 1st, 2009 3:27pm


Pretty good Rox, and it has a bit of ryhthm to it too.

Tue, March 3rd, 2009 11:57am

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