subway carnage

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Thrillers  |  House: Booksie Classic
A man has a long bad day at work and is disturbed by a maniac.

Submitted: November 03, 2013

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It was nine in the evening I was taking a train home from work and was waiting for a train.

 I feared something wrong....very wrong happened. I had a long and stressful day at the caffe and I was not I the mood for anything stopping me from going home. 

 

I could see all the confused faces of the people standing next to me. What had happened? Was anything wrong? Those were some questions I asked myself.

Suddenly the train started to move but people inside the train did not look happy. Not even grumpy. They looked scared, so scared that I could almost feel their fear.

Someone exited the train. They were wearing a suit with a black top hat that covered his face. A normal outfit for a guy at a CASINO! There was one more thing about him. He was holding a gun. I saw someone try to run but he shot them in the leg. 

He turned around to threaten the people on the train so I saw a chance. I tackled him by surprise! He had no clue I was coming. He rolled over and tried to shoot me but I pushed his hand away. I grabbed the gun and managed to call the police but he had escaped! I sprinted out of the subway as fast as I could and found him on young street.

 The police were on there way. They had helicopters with cameras watching our every move following us. He slowed down finally and I sped up. We were both so exhausted from all the running but I did not let him get away. I chased him into my works parking lot. 

There were police surrounding the building. My heart felt like it was beating fifty beats per second. I had him cornered all I wanted to know was who he was. He took off his hat. I recognized him. I used to work with him before he got fired. There was one moment were our eyes met. The fire in his eyes. A crash came from the side of the building and the police were storming in with their guns. It was all over.


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