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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I seek mercy of God, as I am lost in love. Some people call it a sin to love someone more than God. But I believe, I see the image of God in my beloved, which symbolizes love is nothing but a face of God. If god grants me a boon ,I will ask ageless beauty for my beloved. As I understand love comes with sacrifice and pain, so let me get beheaded instead, to bestow upon her forever ,the beauty of a rose.

The Notion Of Love


Oh God forgive me if i get lost,

in the wilderness of love.

For its her dark hair that entangle me,

her bewitching smile that possesses my heart.

My soul rises every time I pray,

but love drags me afar.

Let me be a sinner if so,for they wont know,

This love shows me God in her face,I aspire for.

Love that sedates me to sleep,singing lullaby in my dreams.

My hearts beats a different rythm,

blood tinted with her touch of warmth

I am hypnotized by her innocence,

the sweet memory of her talk.


Can you grant me a boon,I earnestly beg Oh lord!

To thaw her transient beauty into an immortal charm,

So that she never ages at all. If not,

I willingly offer my head ,to execute my condemned soul;

love summons sacrifice ,I guess,but

make her beauteous like a rose!


Submitted: November 22, 2014

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