Wondering (Extremes) Part 1

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Love takes over every aspect of life

Part 1

My Point of View (Love)

Things are so beautiful here
I can't find anything wrong
No pain, no fear
Everything glistens around me
And the shine doesn't hurt my eyes
And there's no reason not to be happy
No violence no one gets harmed
I value what you take for granted
The sunset, the stars, and blissful charms
Here is everything you all missed
Even the greatness in destruction
Down to the things that even get you pissed
Everythings so beautiful here
But I wonder is there anything else

Submitted: October 20, 2009

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I like how you mentioned "greatness in destruction", creation does stem from destruction, and creation is a beautiful thing. Wow that was redundant...anyway, love the last line, leaves you with a feeling of ambiguity.

Tue, October 20th, 2009 4:51pm


I'm glad you caught that one many don't

Tue, October 20th, 2009 11:11am

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