what a catch

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

a date at the park

you should have seen her

the way she moved

in her tight shinny white outfit

tightly held together

in all the right grooves

she can spin

she can curve

you should see

the heads she turns

she's in

she's out

she is no foul

she striking

and she's soft

she's out to take the lot

she has what it takes

she has covered the base

now she's heading my way

and staight towards me

i feel like a child

i went weak at the knees

i put out my hand

we could be the perfect match

into my hand

what a catch

so many people here

yet she picked me

for a whole fifteen seconds

we were on the big screen

on a sunday afternoon

at the base ball league.

By B.R Coster

Submitted: April 13, 2009

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Hey interesting poem.
She picked you!!!

Mon, April 13th, 2009 8:01am



Mon, April 13th, 2009 1:16am


very good poem, it had me thinking... i re-read it a few times, i really liked it :)

Tue, April 14th, 2009 12:35am



Mon, April 13th, 2009 8:34pm


I really enjoyed this one! Good job B!

Tue, April 14th, 2009 5:05pm


thankyou very much:)

Tue, April 14th, 2009 2:18pm

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