"I'm Better Now"

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Free Writing: To exhaust my inner thoughts!!

I use to hate it when I couldn't hear from you, it would drive me literally insane. That's how much you were in my heart my soul. Sometimes I dreamed of you. I would wake up in tears, from the exhaustion, from the struggle, of the night. It's all better now, I have the strength to hold on.


Submitted: April 09, 2013

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ShadowsOfPoetry

Take these first lines of emotions & bring them out of their beginning. This is what I thought of (below) after reading it, but it will be much better when you take it and keep going with your own thoughts and imagination.


In the past I stood like
a contradiction of birds
listening to your voice
inside if this booming heart

In my dreams I devoured you
waking up with exhaustion
rippling through my bones

The night had its cruelty
of slanted fingers that burned
but I said goodnight
before its filthy roots
came too close.

Tue, April 9th, 2013 7:23am

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I appreciate your comment... That was great I really liked your piece..
Ruthi

Tue, April 9th, 2013 12:29am

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