Wondering

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Feeling betrayed, but also needed someone or something.

Feelings of deceit Wonder what's next Feelings of defeat Wonder what's next Feeding off of you Wonder who's next Feeling so blue Wonder what's next Feeling so untrue Wonder what I can do


Submitted: June 26, 2012

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Just A Wilted Rose

Hmmmm...interesting. Unique. Although I read it twice and still can't quite understand, the rhythm was very good and I liked the repetition.

Happy writing!

Tue, June 26th, 2012 9:15pm

Ryan king

If you know what the whole story was, you would get it. In in the process of a full book. You will see if you keep reading in the future. Thank you for your opinions:)

Wed, June 27th, 2012 1:13am

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