I'm Out of Here

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This isn't a poem, it's a song. I know it's rather short but besides that I really like it.

"I'm out of here"

Stuck to this place

it's wall my ball and chain

battle never stops-causes so much pain

Sick of livin'sick of people holdin' me down.

I won't be it's dancing puppet,

you don't like it-shut-up

No more, no more pullin' my strings

I'm out of here, I'm out of here

Locked in this dumb room

It's floor glued to my feet

doors locked from outside, can't hide

Sick of not havin' the key-set me free!

I wont be your dancing puppet

I'll follow my dreams

writing my own rules,

no more no more pullin' my strings

I'm out of here I'm out of here.

-Ryuzaki


Submitted: September 29, 2008

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WhiteRoses on Doomsday

Wow you described what I feel at times. Sometimes you have things and or people that hold you down, stop you from doing what you want to do the most. I know that feeling. Sometimes we all just need to run away sometimes. Good. I like it.

Mon, September 29th, 2008 11:29pm

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Yeah, sorry if it has taken me long to comment back on this, I just finished moving. Yes, running away sounds nice alot of the time, right, un?

Wed, January 14th, 2009 1:23pm

Ryuzaki

Wow!Thanks.
I know, so many people drag and pull down at our souls. I am glad to here that you understand.
-Ryuzaki

Thu, October 2nd, 2008 7:22pm

RamenLover

Swwwwwweeeeettttt. Luved it.

Tue, January 27th, 2009 9:06pm

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Thanks, Toph.

Wed, January 28th, 2009 7:05am

Dark Skylight

Awh :( liked it very much!! :)

Sat, June 20th, 2009 5:46pm

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Thank you

Sat, June 20th, 2009 6:18pm

Hyde

Wonderful! I can't believe that someone in this world can write as well as you do.. I love this, it's like you stole this exact feeling from inside of me.. Amazing.

- Mickey Hyde

Mon, September 28th, 2009 3:31pm

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Wow...thanks so much. So often that's what your work did for me. You really think that I write so well? Have you read your own work? Thank you so much.

Mon, September 28th, 2009 12:38pm

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