Murderer of My Heart

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

When someone you love turns you away or breaks your heart, you feel as if there's no more reason to live.

If I gave you a knife,

would you stab my heart out, would you take my life?

you tore it apart anyway-

why didn't you stay?

Are you the murderer of my heart?

If I gave you a gun,

would you shoot out my mind,would you think it was fun?

you blew me away anyway-

why couldn't I stay?

Are you the murderer of my heart?

If I gave you my heart,

would you give it away, or tear it apart?

you broke it anyway-

don't come back, you can't stay

You became, the murderer of my heart.


Submitted: October 21, 2008

© Copyright 2021 Ryuzaki. All rights reserved.

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zairafirefly

I like where you went with this, and it has a good flow to it. Great job!

Thu, November 6th, 2008 8:20pm

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Thanks! I get the flow comments alot.

Thu, November 6th, 2008 12:29pm

Matsuda

You know, out of all of your stuff on Booksie, I have to say this is my favorite! I really like this one...

Sun, November 9th, 2008 8:29am

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Oh, really? Thanks Matsu. Keep bugging your mom to let you go to the library! I wanna read some of your stuffs!

Mon, November 10th, 2008 12:12pm

Carolyn Lewis Poe

I liked this one, great flow and rythm! Were you looking at this from your perspective or was it you writing about someone else? Very auwsome stuffs! Keep it up! You're going to be a literary genius someday! ;D

~Carolyn Lewis Poe

Fri, November 14th, 2008 4:56am

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Oh, thanks Kira. I have people tell me about my good flow and rythym more than anything else! Uh, my point of view for someone a while ago. Thanks again, awww, a genius? Thanks.~ Ryuzaki

Fri, November 14th, 2008 11:57am

Me Against The World

It's kind of like: If you're going to hurt me, do it thoroughly, because it takes a hell of a lot more than that, and I don't want this halfway pain.

Mon, June 22nd, 2009 7:19pm

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Yes, exactly. Thank you.

Mon, June 22nd, 2009 7:40pm

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