The Boy With Nothing

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fan Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

He didn't know what to feel anymore. Was it hate, anger, sadness? That's why he got rid of them...the boy with no emotions, the boy with no family. The boy with...nothing.

Part 1: The one he left behind

Sasuke Uchiha walked along a quiet path in a lonely back walk of Konoha. He allowed his thoughts to flood into his mind, overseeing any others. Walking away from, " Away from what?" He wondered. It wasn't like there was anything left back there for him. He knew exactly were to go, were there was something for him. The only thing he wanted, revenge.

The girl. She lay now on the ground, he knew she wasn't dead. One last long look behind him...tears. " Hmm" he said to himself. " She always was weak." Keep walking, his mind tells him. Don't ever look back. Back at the only one who ever...loved? No, he didn't know what love was.

" Goodbye, Sakura--" He said monotonely to himself. She couldn't hear him, was it his fault? No- he had to. To get what he wanted, he would do anything. He kept walking, only looking forward. Was he wrong? No, he wasn't wrong...he was an avenger.

Part 2: The one who took away everything

Pain, it sucked him dry. Thoughts and memories of the past that seemed, a forever-ago now swam around like a soul devouring demon. Sometimes it felt as if there was no more to live for. No more purpose. " What's the point?" He would ask himself. As if all's it would take was one slash of pain." Pain, you need pain to end the pain. Yet still. It's a wonder."

He walked on. Lonely and wandering. His path narrow, hard and long, but he would pull through, he had to.The every wake of his being was made to come through. This must be his destiny. The reason he was kept alive. All because of the one who took away everything.

Part 3: Blood Soiled

" Walk. Walk. You know it's your last chance at life. Last chance before the very being of your soul is slashed open by their hate. Pull on their heartstrings. Pull on them 'till they bleed. The heartstrings of those who once said they loved you. Because you don't believe. You won't believe their lies anymore."

These were words and thoughts repeating through his mind.He couldn't wait to see him dead. But he wouldn't be happy until he was. Blood ran from his arm, it trickled slowly. The only thing that could give him relief. He held his kunai by the tip.Soiled from all it had been.He watched as more ran down. He kept on until his arm went numb, still walking as he did.He looked down, unfaded. And realized that everything he had known in his life had been, blood soiled.

Part 4: Becoming Whole

Night fell, the darkness all around him. " Finally..." he whispers. The one thing that could accompany him according to how he felt...theebony feeling of sadness that enveloped him so. He lay down now by a sakura tree, and waited for the night to ease his pain. For when morning came, it would be back.

The sun rose high and a new day dawned. Dreary eyes flittered awake as he forced himself out of his envelope. He began his quest for a real smile, a ...happy ending? No matter what in store, he began his quest for becoming whole.

Part 5: Home

Footsteps. Footsteps in the darkness traveled along an unknown path. " Finally." A voice called out to him. " My Lord's been waiting for you..." said a light voice. With a push of his glasses he gestured him over. " Kabuto..." Sasuke's tired voice whispered. He walked into the darkness with undecided thoughts. " Am I really...home?"

Part 6: Rain on Konoha

A drop of rain slid down onto her forhead as she stared off into nothingness. She was glad for the rain, because noone could tell she was crying that way. She stood up form the bench were she laid last night. Had she been there all day? It seemed as if she had lost track of time. It fealt hard to move, she couldn't break away from what was...what used t be.

The rain fell harder, stinging her arms and face. Yet still she stood, remembering the moments that seemed as if a vapor. The tears ran harder, just as the rain did. But then. Suddenly, they stopped dry. But not the rain. The sadness kept on- the rain on Konoha.

Part 7: Gone

He ran as fast as he could, the rain hitting his face as he went. " Huff, huff, huff." Finally, he stopped. " Sakura..." he said exhaustedly. She gave no answer, not even a glance. " Sakura?" His words got sharp. She couldn't speak, couldn't bare to tell him. " Sakura! Were is he!?" Tears gathered in his eyes as he grabbed onto her arms and fell to his knees. She spoke a whispered word that seemed to move quietly with the wind and rain..."gone...."

Submitted: November 06, 2008

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Jj Morris

very dark and intriging i loved it.

I ask you to check out Dark Weapon my vision of the future, and how humanity tries to cope with no hope. I will value your comment on it.

Sun, November 9th, 2008 6:21pm


Thank you. Are you a Naruto fan? I'll be sure to try your story on! Sounds interesting.

Mon, November 10th, 2008 12:13pm


I love Naruto and this was great work. You must be a big fan, you know a lot. I love this and am hoping for more!

Mon, November 10th, 2008 4:41am


AWESOME! Yes, I do looooovvvveee Naruto. OH.... TRUST ME, THERE WILL BE MORE!!!!! In fact, that story isn't actually done yet. I'm gonna be adding more to it.

Mon, November 10th, 2008 12:14pm

Carolyn Lewis Poe

Glo, I really do like your writing style! I want you to know that, I appreciate it a lot. You make your characters and setting come alive and pop with lividity! I hope to read more soon! ;3 Drop by and check out some of my stuff soon sis! ABERCROMBIE AND FITCH!!!!! >Dlolololol Mellol:)


Fri, November 14th, 2008 4:53am


Thanks, you will I have another poem I wanna publish. Made it a couple days ago in algebra class.

Fri, November 14th, 2008 11:55am


Oooh! I like it!!!

It's a little dark-ish, ut it suits Uchiha Sasuke perfectly! :D


Fri, November 14th, 2008 8:57pm


Thanks. Yeah, I love darkish stories. Especially for Sasuke-kuhn

Sat, November 15th, 2008 9:57am

Me Against The World

OO, Sasuke! I swear your fan-girl alert just went off when I said that. XD


Sat, November 15th, 2008 11:09pm


OOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH! YOU LIKE SASUKE TOO! AWESOME! Yes, it did just go off, it is constantly beeping when it's in my pocket so I have to turn it off sometimes!

Tue, November 18th, 2008 12:00pm


So amazing. A heartwrenching poem... continue, please, I beg you!

Tue, January 27th, 2009 9:04pm


It's not a's a short story. Don't worry, I will's getting hard. I'm thinkg of a way to bring Orochimaru in*orochi ftw*

Wed, January 28th, 2009 7:05am


ah naruto reference! ^.^ i'm not a big fan of naruto anymore, but this made for a nice read nonetheless. his loneliness and pain is a lot deeper when you put it into words like that. =)

Thu, March 5th, 2009 11:18pm


Oh, you don't like it as much anymore? Well at least I gave ya a good read then. Yeah, feeling is my forte.

Fri, March 6th, 2009 10:09am

Ve Ce Wall

Wow.... Speechless I am... So much emotion... I loved it, I think Simon Cowll would too... Even though he is a jerk. Hey maind checking out my story? Just asking, take no offense to that. But I'd really appreciate it. "Universal Animation" Is the name of it and it has a variety of Characters in it. I mean a variety as in a cornacopia of characters... Characters from Naruto(Of couse), Avatar , Where My Dogs At and Street Fighter.


Sat, March 21st, 2009 9:47pm


Thanks so much for your comment. Your story sounds great! I'll be sure to check it out.

Sun, March 22nd, 2009 6:01am


i was in such deep thought whilst i read it, it was incredible, your incredible, it was fantistic, and so was your story on your profile, which am going to leave a comment on, on your page, the story was fantastic tho :) i enjoyed it

xx Stephen xx

Tue, October 27th, 2009 5:50pm


Thank you so much for your comment. I really appreciate it coming from sch an amazing writer like you.

Wed, October 28th, 2009 9:35pm


I LOVED IT!!! that was awesome! totally sasuke. man are you ganna write more? if you are tell me kay cuz i like it!! Are you ganna have the twisted pedophile relation to michael jackson in it (orochimaru)? ha byee

Sun, January 3rd, 2010 8:16am


I....Like....Orochimaru.....*sniff* Thanks for your comment. Um, yeah, I am. Have you read my newest fanfic? Perfect Over Pain? Thanks for all the likings....

Sun, January 3rd, 2010 8:07am


i dont hate him i just like making fun of him hehe but kk ganna read it right now

Mon, January 4th, 2010 3:14am


Oh, thats okay. Alright, thanks.

Sun, January 3rd, 2010 10:02pm

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