Written Death

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

Inspired by the anime called Deathnote,
Wouldn't it be nice sometimes if we could control the time of death?

Scribble-scribble...tick...tick

time is set, the death was right

don't worry, your time is not over yet-

alas, allow me to write your name--

chaos...

Scribble-scribble...tick...tick

your time is set, your death is right

the notebook holds your time,

ah, go ahead, start worrying now, before--

chaos...

Scribble-scribble...tick...tick

your time is over, your death now

they say "what is in a name?" I say power

Check the clock...the time is now

I can see your worrying eyes--

chaos

Scribble-scribble...tick...tick

40 secounds

it won't be to bad...

Close your eyes

the notebook knows

Chaos...Goodbye.


Submitted: October 06, 2008

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zairafirefly

Nice! Is this light, misa, or both? I did enjoy reading this, I do like Death Note.

Thu, November 6th, 2008 8:18pm

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Thanks! Just Light. So tell me, who do you like more L or Kira *cough cough* I mean light?

Thu, November 6th, 2008 12:28pm

Evie Gray1638

Very niice, i luv death note, and this was cool, free style. Good Job!

Sat, November 8th, 2008 3:47am

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Thanks! You said your married? That is so cool, I've never met an adult who likes anime!

Sat, November 8th, 2008 11:12am

zairafirefly

Hm....probably L, because he has more personality quirks.

Sat, November 8th, 2008 7:20am

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YES!!!!!!!!! I AM A SUPREME L FAN!!!!!!!!!! :) You said yoe were married in your profile, that is so cool. I've never met an adult deathnote fan.

Sat, November 8th, 2008 11:15am

zairafirefly

Heh, I'm 27, and I know several people who have seen and/or read Death Note, just not on this site. Not that I'm extremely into it, but I do enjoy it.

Sun, November 9th, 2008 6:08am

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AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! I WOULD LLLLOOOVVVVEEE to meet more Deathnote fans. Okay, my questions are probably starting to annoy but, last one, do you like Near or Mello more?

Mon, November 10th, 2008 2:27pm

zairafirefly

Heh...I didn't watch enough of the series to know who they are, apparently. Sorry to disappoint you on that :

Thu, November 13th, 2008 2:20am

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Oh, it's okay! ;)

Fri, November 14th, 2008 11:53am

little bee

Holy shitake mushrooms, this was an awesome poem. It perfectly captures the feel of Death Note! X] I love it!

Mon, February 9th, 2009 3:05am

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Thanks. You like Deathnote? Who is your favorite charachter?Mines L forever!

Sun, February 8th, 2009 8:29pm

Lawliet

yaay deathnote!!

Fri, March 13th, 2009 7:09pm

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Hey, Love your name. So we're like, the same person huh? I luv L.

Fri, March 13th, 2009 2:45pm

Dark Skylight

This was cool! :) likedd it tooo lol

Sat, June 20th, 2009 5:50pm

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Thanks...I'll be sure to check some of your stuff.

Sat, June 20th, 2009 6:19pm

Me Against The World

I love the rapid, sketchy, and fast paced feel of it. I love that manga by the way. =]

Lids?

Mon, June 22nd, 2009 7:20pm

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You love deathnote, too!!! Nice. I could really connect with you. Yes, this poem is meant to go quickly, just as Light's killings.

Mon, June 22nd, 2009 7:41pm

Marlena

Very cool, love Death note until L died :( Did you see the movie?

Fri, November 20th, 2009 10:45pm

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Yeah, I saw both, 1 and 2. then I also saw the one all about L, very cute. I know, I was horrified when L died, the series almost became worthless, but thatnks to my love for mattxmello, I kept going. (I know, matt was only in one ep. but hey, you gotta love em'!)

Tue, November 24th, 2009 8:31pm

august138

OMG! DEATH NOTE! THIS POEM IS SO KIRA!
(haha, you know which side i'm on already) XD

Sun, November 22nd, 2009 1:51pm

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Oh my god, your a kira fan? I know, the intent of the poem was to truely bring out the feelings of light as he writes people down. However, as my name may obviously show you, I am an L fan. Kira sucks......unless..........it's yaoi...lightxl is so awesome.

Tue, November 24th, 2009 8:29pm

xxNOxNAMExNINJAxx

man this was awesome!!! you totally captured light or as I light to call him KIRA!!!
amazing and seems like something you would find in the series!
LONG LIVE L!!!!!!

Sun, March 28th, 2010 3:36am

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LONG LIVE L!!!!!!!!!!!

Wed, March 31st, 2010 8:07pm

xxNOxNAMExNINJAxx

YEAH DOWN WITH KIRA!!!!!!!!!!

Thu, April 1st, 2010 7:05pm

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L followers unite!

Sat, April 3rd, 2010 8:08pm

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